Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – Profile Reviews & Questions Nate Callen LinkedIn Profile Review

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      Nate Callen
      Participant
        @callen.nate@gmail.com

        @negeen-dargahi  @kent-littlejohn

        I just completed my LinkedIn profile. Could I please get your feedback.

        Thank you

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/nate-callen/

         

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @nate-callen, nice work taking action on your LI profile! My feedback is below:

          We have a graphic designer on the team to help create a background photo for your LinkedIn, as I feel you need a better image to depict your occupation.

          Email Lindsey@coredm.com — have her create a background photo for you AND ask her to add a white background to your profile photo to make it more professional looking.

          Headline: Great job with this!! Make “without” “WITHOUT” so it really pops!

          Summary:

          Awesome work, Nate!!

          Break this sentence up –> “I eliminate your STRESS of where your next high-ticket job is coming from and deliver 5 or 6 figure customers consistently”

          Your scheduled appointment bit should be at the bottom with your call to action.

          Overall, a really really great job on your summary!!

          Tag me in your revision!

           

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