Hi @julia-leung!

Sorry for the late response, I was on vacation and now I’m back and ready to help!

Okay first off, GREAT job taking action on your profile… you really are a fast learner!

Your photo and background photo look great.

Let’s make your headline a bit more direct and let’s take out your phone number (that goes at the bottom of your summary)

Try filling this out instead —>

Want To Find QUALIFIED Buyers WITHOUT Losing Money?☆ I’m an EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION] ☆☞ MSG Me!

@julia-leung guess what? Your summary content looks SUPER! Zero revisions needed on that end. Excellent work!

@julia-leung – OK, some TYPOS.  Please proof this CAREFULLY.  In your headline, can you add “the” before San Mateo area? (for example) If you don’t want to proof, pay someone $5 on Fiverr to proof it for you!

Also, I think you can lose BOTH these sentences:
This is NOT a plea for MORE business.

This is ME helping you gain COMPLETE control of your home selling process.

You’ve just positioned yourself really well.  So I think you are GOOD!  You don’t need that piece.  But it’s a choice, so leave it in if you like it.

GREAT JOB!!

@julia-leung – OK, some TYPOS.  Please proof this CAREFULLY.  In your headline, can you add “the” before San Mateo area? (for example) If you don’t want to proof, pay someone $5 on Fiverr to proof it for you!

Also, I think you can lose BOTH these sentences:
This is NOT a plea for MORE business.

This is ME helping you gain COMPLETE control of your home selling process.

You’ve just positioned yourself really well.  So I think you are GOOD!  You don’t need that piece.  But it’s a choice, so leave it in if you like it.

GREAT JOB!!