5 replies, 3 voices Last updated by n d 6 years, 3 months ago
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    • #13313

      Pat Ford
      Participant
        @pat.ford@crye-leike.com

        Not sure what this is referring to in the program?

        Have I missed something in the training?

      • #13502

        Halle Eavelyn
        Moderator
          @halle@coredm.com

          I think we talked about this on yesterday’s Q&A call? KEEP GOING in the training!! You’ll get there!

        • #13526

          Pat Ford
          Participant
            @pat.ford@crye-leike.com

            Hi Halle,

             

            I am almost done with module 3. I have finally finished the 30 second infomercial and I am having problems sending it via email to attach it for review. I have working on this since 11:00a.m. this morning!

            • #13659

              n d
              Keymaster
                @negeen@coredm.com

                Hi @pat-ford!

                If you can type it out and put it in the ‘infomercial’ forum for review, that would be great!

                Nice job taking action 🙂

                 

            • #13665

              Pat Ford
              Participant
                @pat.ford@crye-leike.com

                Negeen,

                 

                Here is what I have written, and made attempts to video myself but it is not what I think would be screen worthy. Module 3 will not let me move to the next one without the infomercial. The words are below:

                30 second infomercial

                Want amazing results in your Real estate experience? Need someone who actually listens to your needs? Look no further, you are in the right place. I am currently in the Nashville, TN area. My office is in Spring Hill, TN. Come by and see me soon, or call my cell 615 512-7350.

                • #13669

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    @pat-ford, nice start! Below is my feedback:

                    Your infomercial is currently way too short, and the point is for you to write the script, get it approved and then film to post in your LinkedIn profile.

                    Your first question is great. I want you to think of 2 more pain point questions…

                    (after you ask 3 questions)

                    If this sounds like you… I know EXACTLY how to help.

                    Hi, I’m  @pat-ford

                    and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

                    (2-3 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help — which you have great sentences above that can go right here)

                    (motivating 1 liner)

                    If you’re wanting _______________ then message or call me TODAY at _________ to see if we’re a good fit.

                    ^ it’s okay if this runs over time. Just keep it under 1min 30sec

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