5 replies, 4 voices Last updated by n d 6 years, 3 months ago
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    • #13214

      Pat Ford
      Participant
        @pat.ford@crye-leike.com

        Still working on my profile.

        Is this photo ok? Also, I am working on a headline now, and revised content.

      • #13244

        Halle Eavelyn
        Moderator
          @halle@coredm.com

          Awesome, @pat-ford!

        • #13532

          Pat Ford
          Participant
            @pat.ford@crye-leike.com

            Halle,

            I am just not that computer “savvy” !! I have recorded my 30 second infomercial after hours of attempts to get it right on my IPhone. Now it will not send to my email for some reason? I wonder if the file is too large?

            It’s only 27 seconds. Do you have any ideas?

            • #13667

              n d
              Keymaster
                @negeen@coredm.com

                Hi @pat-ford, see if you can upload it on here!

                If you see the text box, scroll down a little bit more and you will see “select file” and click on the video you’d like to use.

                Hope this helps!

            • #13713

              Remy Boots
              Participant
                @zijacoach@yahoo.com

                @negeen-dargahi @halle-eavelyn here’s my profile link. http://www.linkedin.com/in/remy-boots-3a458741
                Lindsey and I are working on banner. The one I thought would be good doesn’t work. So we have to modify it. I also have a number of questions for tomorrow.

                Remy

                • #13787

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    Hi @remy-boots, nice job taking action! Few things:

                    I need you to go to your privacy settings in LinkedIn and allow your profile photo to be public. I cannot see a profile photo when I click on your page.

                    I also would like you to go back through the profile accelerator.

                    The headline is on the right path but it doesn’t really make sense… fill out this template instead:

                    Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

                    Summary:

                    (examples below)
                    https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
                    https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

                    The information you have is mainly about you and you want to make it about THEM and HOW you can help them and WHY they should work with you. I do like the part you said about “what others have said” good job on that!

                    Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

                    Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

                    THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
                    2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

                    Who you like to work with (please refer to the examples so you can see how much to write)

                    Then add a call to action with your contact info:

                    If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

                    **remy, come with questions to the live Q&A calls**

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