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Hi @judy-cooper, when I clicked on the link, it did not take me to your profile. To get your profile URL please follow these steps.
- linkedin.com
- click on ‘me’ at top right hand corner
- click ‘view profile
- now that you are at your profile, please copy the URL in the address bar above
- now send me that url
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OK here we go:
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@judy-cooper, I can already tell you are a rockstar at this 😉 below is my feedback…
- you NEED a background image –> email our graphic designer and have her create one for you. She has loads of stock images –> Lindsey@coredm.com
- Great profile photo! Also, send the photo to Lindsey and have her add in a white background to brighten it up a bit
Okay, when I was reading your headline, I in no way thought you were a realtor. You really want to get specific. Try this template —>
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞MSG Me!
OUTSTANDING PROFILE SUMMARY — I am so proud of your work. My attention was grab 1000% of the time and you really know how to talk to your ideal client! Way to go!!
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Hi Judy,
Leigh Ann here, I’m in the program and am taking a look at other’s profiles to get a better understanding of what works best.
I saw this typo (in bold) and wanted to alert you:
I had a catastrophic life event forcing me to seel my own house under duress and without support.
Nicely done profile, really engaging. All the best!
Leigh Ann
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Hey, @judy-cooper-2
Watch my videos (AGAIN, if need be): Benefits Marketing, Benefits Marketing II, and What’s the worst thing that can happen? THEN… with all that fresh in your mind…REWRITE the summary and the profile to TAKE OUT THE WORD I… Everywhere if you can, and as many places as you can!
Right now, your profile is all about YOU!! And we want it to be about THEM!! You CAN talk about yourself, but only in regards to “What’s in it for them!”
So for example, this:
I know what I am doing and I am good at it
I move FAST. I Buy ‘AS-IS’ and I pay CASH.
You get to focus on closing your file and getting paid!
Might become THIS:
You need someone who is FAST, will buy AS-IS, pays CASH, and is GREAT at what they do. That’s ME!
So you can focus on closing your file and getting paid!
Revise and keep taking Massive Imperfect Action!! Great work!!
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