Hi @zak-fang!! A really nice start on your LinkedIn profile! Below is my feedback:

Background photo – this could look more professional. If you want to keep the quote, keep it! Or consider an image of something related to the stock market or “retirement paradise” — you can email our graphic designer to help with this —-> Lindsey@coredm.com

Profile Photo – I want you to zoom in 60% so we can see your smiling face. We don’t need to see the rest of your body 🙂 also send that photo to Lindsey and have her add a white background to make it pop!

Headline looks GREAT!!

Summary:

Summary:

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

You have loads of great information but it needs to be organized like the ones in the examples.

Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!