Hi @korinna-sehringer!! You are fast 🙂

Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

I absolutely love your profile photo AND your cover photo!

Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

*** choose to target 1 market and go in depth about both of them in your summary*****
Summary:

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/
You have GREAT information but it just needs to be organized. Refer to the outline those examples provide!

I want the “who I work with” part to be towards the top of your profile. It’s important that your readers know exactly who you work with from the beginning.

(After you reorganize…)
Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

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