Hi @dave-and-carol-warren!! I just saw your submission, thank you for using the support forum. Few things:

• Great profile photo, Dave! You look professional and inviting.

Headline (words under name):

Instead of having “Owner at Dave Warren & Associates” ….how about you fill this out instead and add it in that spot to provide more information to your potential clients.

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

I don’t see anything filled out in your summary. This is important. Go to ‘view profile’ and click on the pencil icon by your name. Then scroll down to where you see ‘summary’ and add in information in there.

Copy these profile outlines if you need to:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/
https://www.linkedin.com/in/marcustexada/

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.
2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!