2 years, 9 months ago-
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Hi @nina-tracey, thank you so much for your patience while I reviewed your profile! First off, welcome to the program and fantastic job taking action. Below are my comments:
Beautiful and professional profile photo – looks great!
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. I’d like you to have something better related to your business. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
I love what you have written as your headline. It’s a little wordy and i’d like for you to remove the heart emoji. Let’s really make it POP! How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
Absolutely fantastic job on your sales letter! I would personally remove some of the emojis before your starting sentences because it’s making it hard to flow with your message. The emojis are breaking up the flow of reading if that makes sense.
If you get rid of 50% of the emojis, you should be good to go.
SUPER proud of your work!!
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Hi @nina-tracey, below are steps in doing so:
Tap your profile picture > Settings.
Tap Visibility > Share job changes, education changes, and work anniversaries from profile under Visibility of your LinkedIn activity.
Switch the toggle to Yes to share your profile edits or to No to stop sharing your profile edits. -
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Ok, I have improved the page. Here it is for your review.
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