Please review my "revised" help statement

[Linda Sparks]

I help business owners increase sales, accelerate business value and maximize retirement income.

@halle-eavelyn

[Halle Eavelyn]

I’d put late-stage, @linda-sparks, especially if you don’t work with startups or people developing exit strategies.

Try some combo of these:

I help established business owners accelerate sales and business value, and maximize retirement income.

I help late stage business owners increase sales and business value, and maximize retirement income.

I help established business owners create accelerated exit strategies that lead to delightful retirement lifestyles.

I help established business owners create powerful exit strategies that lead to accelerated luxury retirement lifestyles.

 

 

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