Please reveiw linkedin profile

[Melissa Honea]

Hi, please review my linked.on profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissahonea/

[n d]

Hey @melissa-honea, nice job taking action on your LinkedIn profile! Below are my comments and changes i’d like you to make:

This is a good profile photo – please zoom in more so we can see your face better. Also – if you take a photo smiling with your teeth, that would also be helpful with engagement.

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting and doesn’t showcase your business field. I’d like you to email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

LOVE it! Write out “&” to “and” if you can.

About section:

I love your content! Please shorten up your testimonial to only 2-3 sentences. Please look at the example below to know what I’m talking about:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/jennifer-harris-aa0487119/

CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

 

[Melissa Honea]

Hi, please review my new  linked.in profile:

http://app.hecp.com/members/melissa-honea/profile/

Please provide suggestions, much appreciated!

[Melissa Honea]

Hi, please review my new linkedin profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/melissahonea/?trk=public-profile-join-page

 

[n d]

Hi @melissa-honea! SUPER job making those revisions – your new banner image looks awesome!!

Your sales letter looks fantastic!! 🙂

[Melissa Honea]

Thank you so much for your help! Time to move on and finish Module 1

[n d]

Proud of you, @melissa-honea!!

[Melissa Honea]

Hi, I cannot figure out how to post on the support forum. I am confused. I have my LinkedIn Realtor Trojan Horse questions, but they say nothing about Real Estate. I am at a loss as to what to say to lead the actual phone conversation into the topic of Real Estate using the Trojan Horse Call-Structure?

Thanks, Melissa Honea

[n d]

Hey @melissa-honea – are you able to make it to my technical call today on Zoom??? I can walk you through all of that!

Mondays at 11am Eastern

Wednesdays at 6pm Eastern

The link to join for both is http://zoom.us/j/4496238008

Let me know!

[Melissa Honea]

Hi, its Tuesday, but I definitely will tomorrow

[n d]

@melissa-honea – LOL you’re right! Thank you for catching that!

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