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June 25, 2018 at 4:20 pm #15096
David Youngman with Legal Shield and Id Theft Protection
My wife and my children mean everything to me. My wife says that she has married a “Young Man” forever, LOL. (my last name – Youngman) All kidding aside, a question my mentors have asked me to think about deeply is my WHY I do what I do?
Why is my business Legal Shield and Id Theft Protection for All?
In fact, what is my Why in all areas of life?
Why, I do believe is a relevant question for Conscious Living.
I am a member of the Knights of Columbus and have been for years. As well, I am a family man with two beautiful daughters. The Knights are the protectors and helpers of the family and the community. As a Knight of Columbus member, I have the vision in today’s world that Legal Shield and ID Theft Protection perfectly align with the core values of the Knights. A significant part of MY WHY is that I promote Id Theft Protection which has become an absolute need today in a world of data breeches using our personal information. These data breeches can destroy families and their dreams for generations. Your life, your children’s lives, Employers and Businesses pay attention. You can be on your way for a family cruise vacation out of the country, you hand over your passport only to discover that someone has stolen your identity. You have a warrant for your arrest and they take you to jail instead of going on your family cruise. Now the question comes how to prove I am a victim of Identity Theft? Imagine the time, the cost, and the stress it causes. Imagine how you and your family would feel after getting over the initial shock of not being able to go on your well-deserved vacation. Additionally, If you are a professional that has a license to work for a living you may be just as surprised.
My services will PROTECT, RESTORE, and Give you PEACE OF MIND. My mentor also said there are two kinds of people who protect and empower their families. Those who are PROactive and those who are REactive. I am in the protection business for those who want to be proactive in life. Another significant part of My WHY is that our Legal Protection provides justice that is accessible and affordable across North America. Now serving over 4 million users of Legal Shield today and growing, I am proud to say that my business protects and empowers families, communities and businesses of all sizes.
My WHY is that I am a Protect and Empower and I happily Serve my Community. I support Justice for All.
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June 25, 2018 at 4:22 pm #15101
@david-youngman, nice work on starting your hero story! I’m tagging in @halle-eavelyn to provide you some feedback!
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June 25, 2018 at 7:53 pm #15143
Hi, @david-youngman – great start!! Your opening is a little “Why I am doing this homework assignment.” So it doesn’t feel organic.
You don’t need to explain why you have been ASSIGNED this story, you want to explain why you’ve been compelled to WRITE THE TRUTH of YOUR STORY.
Can you try the opening again…
And overall, don’t tell me ABOUT your WHY, just TELL ME (your reader) WHY. Make sense?
Tag me in your next revision!
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