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      Peter Neufeldt
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        @peter@peakperformanceconsulting.ca

        Attached is my 30 second infomercial.

        I would appreciate your feedback!

        Thanks!

        Peter Neufeldt

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        n d
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          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @peter-neufeldt!

          A really nice job on your infomercial! I love that you asked pain point questions. I do feel there needs to be some organization with your content – such as sharing what you do, who you work with, etc.

          Great call to action!

          Please fill out this template below and tag me in your revision:

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

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