Hey  @nelson-scott 

! Nice work taking massive imperfect action on your profile! Below is my feedback:

Great profile photo! Can you email your picture to our graphic designer and have her add in a white background for you —>
Lindsey@coredm.com

She can also create a background (cover photo) for your LI page! Email her!

Headline (words under your name) — this needs work and I’d like to you fill this out and add it to that location:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Summary:

(examples below)
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Nelson, your summary is mainly about YOU… but you need it to be about THEM. This is a sales letter to them and how you can serve them.

Outline of summary you can follow and fill in:

Your first 2 sentences of your summary are the MOST important. How about you list 3 questions your clients struggle with. What are their pain points? “Tired of _____” “Want _______ but CANT?” “Are you ______?”

• THEN, after you list pain points, say HOW you can help them and WHAT exactly you do to help them achieve that.

2 sentences how are you different than your competitors

Who you like to work with

Then add a call to action with your contact info:

If you’re wanting _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______to see if we’re a good fit!

p.s …. OR you can just copy Kent’s outline 😉