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March 24, 2021 at 2:08 pm #46090
30 second commercial submitted for review by Larry Clarke
What if you or your loved one wants to sell the large, longtime family home and relocate to a smaller “safer environment”? Do you need someone to safeguard you or you loved one from the extraordinarily stressful, high speed, and legally complex process that is common in real estate today.
If you answered yes that is exactly what I can do for you or your loved one! I safeguard the home seller during the transaction process I ensure that they stay in charge of their affairs at the same time.
Essentially…I have the SKILL and KNOWLEDGE to deal with such issues as multiple contract offers on the house, Renting back the home after closing home health care, Bridge Loans, downsizing, garage sales/estate sales, communicating with adult children, loss of independence, home repair/remodeling and preserving legacy.
Message me here on Linked In to see if we are a good fit and can work together.
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March 25, 2021 at 11:32 am #46103
Hi @larry-clarke, this is a very good start to your infomercial!
Below I have revised a few parts but also left some spots blank for you to fill in. Your 2nd question is a bit of a run-on sentence so let’s break it up into two separate questions.
Please look below:
Do you or your loved one want to sell your large, longtime family home and relocate to a smaller “safer environment”?
Want _______ but don’t know where to begin?
NEED __________?
If you answered YES to those questions, that is exactly what I can do for you or your loved one! I safeguard the home seller during the transaction process while I ensure that they stay in charge of their affairs at the same time!
Essentially…
I have the SKILL and KNOWLEDGE to deal with such issues as multiple contracts offers on the house, Renting back the home after closing home health care, Bridge Loans, and downsizing. Need to do a big garage sales/estate sales but overwhelmed by that task? Don’t worry – my team and I are equipped to make every step of this process easy and manageable. We also help to communicate with adult children, loss of independence, home repair/remodeling and preserving legacy.
If this sounds like something you are interested in learning more about, message me here on Linked In to see if we are a good fit!
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March 30, 2021 at 6:49 pm #46157
here is revisec version 3/30/21
Do you want to sell the large, longtime family home and relocate to a smaller “safer environment”?
Do you need someone to safeguard you or you loved one in the process?
Would you like to be protected from the extraordinarily stressful, high speed, and legally complex process that is common in real estate today?
If you answered yes that is exactly what I can do for +you or your loved one! I safeguard the home seller during the transaction process I ensure that they stay in charge of their affairs at the same time.
Essentially…I have the SKILL and KNOWLEDGE to deal with such issues as multiple contract offers on the house, Renting back the home after closing home health care, Bridge Loans, downsizing, garage sales/estate sales, communicating with adult children, loss of independence, home repair/remodeling and preserving legacy.
Message me here on Linked In to see if we are a good fit and can work together.
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March 31, 2021 at 10:20 am #46158
any thoughts on this revision. thanks in advance for your help.
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April 1, 2021 at 11:07 am #46176
Hi @larry-clarke – I replied to one of your other posts:
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