@halle-eavelyn, @negeen-dargahi  Hi you two.  I have finally completed my Hero Story and will be most interested in any feedback you may have.  I don’t know where it went…I just clicked on Submit.

I must say the most interesting aspect of it was to switch to writing in the 3rd person.  Was much easier and made it much more interesting as I looked at it from the “outside”.

Thanks.

Claudia