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    • #31873

      filippa reading
      Participant
        @filippa321@gmail.com

        Hi there!

        My infomercial… @negeen-dargahi  @halle-eavelyn

        Not sure who to tag…

        Xoxo,

        Filippa

         

      • #31879

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @filippa-reading! I see your post above but I do not see a file or content related to your infomercial. Would you mind commenting below what you’d like reviewed?

          Thank you!

        • #31883

          filippa reading
          Participant
            @filippa321@gmail.com

            Infomercial. Take One! Let’s try this again! @negeen-dargahi  @halle-eavelyn

            Filippa

            http://app.hecp.com/forums/reply/31879/

          • #31892

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @filippa-reading, there may be some confusion – you are sending a link to this current forum. Can you please let me know if you are sending a video link or your infomercial script?

              If it is a video, please tell me if it’s on your profile or if you’re trying to paste the link.

              If it is the script, please paste it.

            • #31937

              filippa reading
              Participant
                @filippa321@gmail.com

                @negeen-dargahi – I’m sending the video clip… I thought I was doing the right thing by going to Infomercials and posting it there… Tell me what to do? Thanks!

                 

                Filippa

              • #31939

                filippa reading
                Participant
                  @filippa321@gmail.com

                  @negeen-dargahi – NOW? It’s a YouTube link…

                   

                  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dOuWcTXMBYA

                   

                  Filippa

                • #31972

                  filippa reading
                  Participant
                    @filippa321@gmail.com

                    @negeen-dargahi – I can click on the YouTube video…so I assume you can as well? Correct?

                    When you’re asking if I posted it on my profile…do you mean LI or here?

                    I have not posted it on LI…since I want approval…

                    Filippa

                     

                  • #32021

                    n d
                    Keymaster
                      @negeen@coredm.com

                      Hi @filippa-reading! YES, I was able to see it 🙂

                      You look great!

                      The video would be a lot better if you propped your phone against something and turned the phone horizontally.

                      Also, practice reading your script a couple of times off camera so it comes off more naturally.

                      Please watch the “VIDEO TIPS” vidoe in the Transformational Business Strategy module (bottom middle module on your MAIN DASHBOARD – turquoise with a bulls eye) video index is to the right of the video window, in alphabetical order.

                      Halle goes into detail on how to film a great infomercial.

                      What you have is good – so if you choose to refilm, please take those steps above ^

                      • This reply was modified 5 years, 7 months ago by n d.
                    • #32133

                      filippa reading
                      Participant
                        @filippa321@gmail.com

                        Thanks @negeen-dargahi – Just watched Halle’s video and will re-do mine!

                        Filippa

                      • #33008

                        Halle Eavelyn
                        Moderator
                          @halle@coredm.com

                          Hi, @filippa-reading!  Did you redo your infomercial yet? PLEASE continue to take this action and get it done! This will help!!

                        • #33014

                          filippa reading
                          Participant
                            @filippa321@gmail.com

                            @halle-eavelyn – I did and I just uploaded it to YouTube and I just HATE it. Hate seeing myself. Hate that I sound scripted. Hate my script…and now I’m done complaining! But I hate it…still…

                          • #33026

                            Halle Eavelyn
                            Moderator
                              @halle@coredm.com

                              Well, THANKS for your honesty, @filippa-reading!  Do other people hate it, or just you?? And where’s the link so I can hate it, too?? Just kidding 🙂  I’m guessing this is a mindset issue.  But let me see the video first…

                               

                              XXOO

                            • #33040

                              filippa reading
                              Participant
                                @filippa321@gmail.com

                                @halle-eavelyn

                                https://youtu.be/7vXNloQLSu0

                                (still hate it…)

                              • #33084

                                filippa reading
                                Participant
                                  @filippa321@gmail.com

                                  @halle-eavelyn

                                  Send you my infomercial yesterday. In the right forum…I believe.

                                • #33190

                                  Halle Eavelyn
                                  Moderator
                                    @halle@coredm.com

                                    I’m not seeing another post, @filippa-reading, and the link above is still showing that the video is unavailable.

                                  • #33312

                                    n d
                                    Keymaster
                                      @negeen@coredm.com

                                      Hi @halle-eavelyn! The video is working for me – tagging so you can provide your feedback!

                                      My personal thoughts:

                                      I agree with you, @filippa-reading …because you are NOT passionate in this video… I don’t feel the passion or excitement.

                                      My recommendation:

                                      Use the script to stay organized with your point and try to refilm following that structure –  keep it under 2 minutes. If you know the general information that the script provides, challenge yourself to go off script and see how your energy changes. I do this all the time with my personal videos.

                                      The reason we have a script in place is so people do not trail off and talk and talk and talk.

                                      If you can get to the point with the SAME message, give it a shot and let me know how it goes 🙂

                                      • This reply was modified 5 years, 6 months ago by n d.
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